Voices in your head,
Voices in your ear,
Voices in your voices.
The story as usual is at Voices
~Aditya
P.S> This borders on banality. Excuse the usage of words, or rather too many of those words.
Voices in your ear,
Voices in your voices.
The story as usual is at Voices
~Aditya
P.S> This borders on banality. Excuse the usage of words, or rather too many of those words.
9 comments:
No words! None!!
But couldn't help wonder why the boy, her son, their son, his son, who -had given his 10th exam, is waiting for his results, is gonna join PU- goes to school with his lunch and satchel packed.
Whow buddy.. read through ur story...
I must say.. it was a bit too long for such a small content.. but neverthless found it really interesting..
So, what are u doing right now..
I am currently joining SPJAIN, after 3 years of working in the IT domain.. was with Hewlett packard.
So, really nice to have someone who has finished his MBA still managing to find lot of time pursuing his real interest in blogs...
By the way.. i wanted to know if you would prefer a Blog link-exchange..
and which blog of urs would u like me to link ??
Read it again.Now got the clarity.
Understood the nucleus of the story.
good one.
To answer Lazy He goes to school with Lunch box and satchel bcoz he is still his mother"s son or his school does not have a decent canteen or the economics
Err.. Uncle.. I meant that the school wouldn't be functioning because the 10th results were yet to come.. So the boy wouldn't have to carry books.. Not that he was to be independent..
I particulary loved the first part of the story!! gr8 narration there
I have the same doubt as Lazy Lavender but then I am not aware of what happens in the place where u live..
Apart from this ambiguity.. the story made a good read despite it being long.. Using colours of clothing to sketch your characters was a nice move
The entire school thing was not for that day, it was a more of a reflection of the days when she used to get up from sleep and attend to the needs of her son. it does not mean that she did it that day.
that is the reason that the next paragraph starts of with "today is a special day"
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