Jul 5, 2008

Bedroom

No buildup, no introduction. Just the story.
No essence, no filled up space. Just the story

The story is at Bedroom

7 comments:

Arti Honrao said...

Hi!

I liked the way you have written it; no build up, no introduction ... [eh?]

I knew how it would end, perhaps that is how it is with writers :D




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Arti

aditya said...

@arti
Thanks
I guess that after a point of time when we are looking to possible tales to weave, we are accustomed to all possible routes a story can take and from the way a story is written, get a mental framework as to where the story is going to go. I think it comes from practice...

Arti Honrao said...

I seriously feel you should consider getting published.


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Arti

aditya said...

@ Arti
Publishing is something that I can never get myself to do. Writing is something too personal for me. I do not want to be judged on it. I do not want it compared to how other people write. I do know that it smacks of fear, but it is not. It is more of possessiveness. I do not mind letting you read it, and comment on it in public, or think about it in personal. If you comment in public, we can take up the conversation. If you think in private, I do not care.
In the end, personal, therefore it can be seen by everyone, not personal for it is mine. :D

Arti Honrao said...

Every individual has his / her own opinion.
No one can ever change that.

I just thought I'd let you know what I feel. :)

I'll be coming here as long as you publish your work here!



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Arti

Anonymous said...

Hi aditya
coming across ur blog was absolutely accidental.....but thn cudn't stop with just corporate masking so went on reading n i must say u write really well...
Devika

aditya said...

Hi Devika
Welcome. Happy to know that you find something on my blog that interests you.
Aditya